Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, it is a fact that sport is gaining popularity worldwide. Some people claim that playing sport can be society-related activity. Sceptics, in contrast, still consider sport as a form of entertainment. There is justification for both of these perspectives.
To begin with, it is undeniable that many people do not play sport professionally. It is believed that sport can release stress from overload of work, thus it is an effective way to relax in spare time. Additionally, sport is condered as a tool for keeping fit and strengthening the relationship with others.
Nevertheless, sport can contribute to the development in quality of life of both individual and society. Playing sport frequently can have positive impacts on human heath, therefore, budgets for insurances can be saved and allocated to other alarminng issues, especially traffic infrastructure and pollution. Moreover, sport can prevent people from serious diseases such as heart attack and diabet resulting in the decrease in fatal rate.
Moreover, sport can have significant advantages on the national economy. It is clear that organizing international sport events such as World Cup and Olympic can attract many tourists worldwide, contributing to the rapid developmet in tourism. Additionally, national sport team can be a pride of the whole country as the win the gold medal in an important tournament.
In conclusion, although some people play sport as a leisure activity, I still believe that sport can have significant impact on the whole society, especially on heath and economy. The more actively individuals participate in sport, the better society will be.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39463601533 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19201470607 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4171497094 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229810814178 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877622581889 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564910925024 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1483938638 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653500377076 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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