some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school, discuss both views
when finish tertiary school, teenagers face with dilemma of carrying on studying at higher education or getting a profession immediately.
on the one hand, the option to getting the occupation after school brings some benefits to people . Firstly, in order to be continued learning in university or college, adolescents need to be able to pay the tuition in the school for several years. It is possibly, therefore, unaffordable for their family, which will incur an added burden if their children assertively keep learning in higher education. secondly, the value of getting a profession early will help people earn an amount of money that will support them pay for the proliferation of living costs, simultaneously they can enable to experience the impediments of this unpredictable life, which will make them become strong, mature and independent.
on the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why people tend to choose to carry on their education after high school. First, the demand for complicated occupations such as doctor, mechanical engineer, CEO of the corporation has been increasing recently, this requires people with high degrees and expertise in particular fields. second, the job market is rigorously competitive nowadays. ENterprises and corporations will prioritize candidates who can meet their strict criteria as well as employees have to be competent and qualified to find the opportunity amongst people.
in conclusion, the requirements of employers currently are so high. Consequently, teenagers should learn in university or collage if the circumstance allows for doing it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47983870968 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07788817055 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657258064516 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.300362874 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.545454545 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8181818182 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132662037704 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539516772038 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568260042812 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765234831234 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321943345175 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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