Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views
It is believed that the best way to success is to go to university or college. However, other people support the idea of seeking a job right arter highschool. While there are benefits to go for higher education, there are also good reasons to work after highschool.
On the one hand, continuing to go to university or college after highschool is beneficial in some ways. Firts and foremost, higher education can help young people lay a good foundation for the life ahead of them. Because studying at university can give them countless oppotunities to build strong relationship, especially with professors or experts at university, which can help students write a letter of recommendation to get a good job. Secondly, youngsters are able to learn academic knowledge, which can not get if they choose to work. This knowledge is useful for progessing rapidly in the future career. For example, if young people want to work as a white-collar workers, they must study appropriate academic knowledge such as business management, human resources, marketing...
On the other hand,there are some reasons why students should choose to work after highschool. Firstly, working can help youngsters collect practical working experience. If they begin to seek a job early, they can start their professional career sooner than their fellows. Moreover, young people can live independently on their own without asking for financial support from their parents. Because they are able to earn money by themselves to meet basic human needs.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both going for higher education at university or college and working right after school are advantageous in their own ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25555555556 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91200627081 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2949432228 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225644132733 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763934111599 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065786537302 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14912952221 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530060988298 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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