Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views
Upon graduating from high school, the choice of pupils whether to continue their education is a source of controversy. There are a widespread belief that moving forward to higher education is the straight way to success, while some people argue that graduated pupils ought to get a job immediately after they leave school.
Learning at university or college is beneficial to students to some extent. Firstly, a college education provides students with higher-level qualification, which is what employers are searching these days. As the result, job candidates with college qualification have a higher chance to have an occupation and earn their livings compare to those who do not attended universities. Secondly, the job market nowadays where hundreds of people chasing for the top job, is becoming more and more competitive. As the result, it is recommended for a person to have a graduated degree, which allows them to find their appropriate position in the job and companies applied and get well-paid.
After finish high school education, there are a variety of reasons for children to join in the labor force immediately after high school graduation. The first reason is working straight after high school helps people making money so that they are able to live independently. Furthermore,they have to meet, cooperate with other colleagues and confront with a variety of social networking issue. As the result, they are more likely to become more mature. The second reason is they are able to progress rapidly in their career, which may help them to obtain a lot of real experience and skills in their chosen profession.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both studying at university or college and get a job straight after high school have their own unique advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18339100346 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88965664739 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8480578361 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250896517866 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911856381503 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881881706988 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178217345629 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765573468176 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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