Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.
If asked whether it is studying at university or getting a job straight after school that is the best career path, many would struggle to make the fianal choice. While going to sclool has its own benefits , going to work early would provide people with considerable advantages.
On the one hand, there are some merits to continue the education program at higher level. Firstly, it is the qualification that the most enterprises depend on to set up the level of salary to their staffs. In the labour market, the intense competition requires applicants to prove their abilities by showing their qualifications at the first round of the recruitment process. For example, if one of two applicants possesses a university degree and the other get a college degree, it would be a high possibility that the first is employed or offered a higher salary. Secondly, it is obvious that putting the knowledge gained from university into practice would become more logical and more systematic, which helps people to identify and to solve the problem more easily.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why working straight after school is beneficial in some ways. The first reason is that people could acquire more skills with having early a great number of experiences in the working environment. For example, many new comers tend to get into trouble with prissy customers while experienced salesman can quickly give a various of options to mollify their anger. Another reason is that while being able to earn money as soon as possible, young people will likely be mature enough, living independently on their own income.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both working right after school and choosing to pursue education each have their own unique values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03092783505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62625462605 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4784341861 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226219939346 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790475493159 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793016207246 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135603224726 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652758216281 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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