Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are always be two sides of view to determine the wise judgment of law-breaker. From a conservative view may suggest that punishment should be conducted in fixed term with no excuse. In another hand, liberal view will argue that statement. The judgment does not humanize the crime-doer if the judge renounces the law without seeing of any right voice from the man-suspected crime.
A strict judgment that is conducted by the judge may enforce the law and perhaps successfully minimize the violence. A traditional law, deliberating a man's vital organ to generate, was reported successfully reducing child sexual abuse, in the late of 1670 in a deep tribe of Africa. Unfortunately, when the conventional punishment, the prison, firstly had been launched by the government by the end of world war II, the committed person to child abuse 90% could release from the plague. That phenomenon could happen due to the judge have to hear from a witness, and the witness somehow can be paid by a criminal.
That is the downside example from the conventional law. However, the modern punishment may be justified due to its enforcement of the human right. The witness and the proof are the vital tools to state the right punishment. The primordial of human life which enhance to take account is the right to live and to do justice whoever the person is a sinner. In so forth, the conventional judges do not see the suspected man is guilty before the law is said so or before the evidence and witness confirm it.
The traditional and the conventional law may take role part to decide the wrong and the right person. However, our updated punishment now, the prison, have to be straightened clearly due to not all prisoners have already become a straight person after in jail. Surprisingly, they become much more mature criminal after in cage. Above all, whatever humans' law on punishment, fixed or unfixed, could not punish a sinner fair enough only the God's judgment does.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8776119403 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77183749379 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549253731343 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0720803839 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143462936586 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450746559292 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422892167558 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895459958787 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467490016772 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.