Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that there should be a certainty of punishment for the people who committed to a notorious crime. In my view, the degree of punishment should be considered by the reason and motivation for committing it and also the personal background of the offender.
On the one hand, people believe that the severity and certainty of punishment could be give a deterrence effect for both the offender and the common people. It could help to avoid the offender turning to be a recidivist and also to prevent the people to commit a kind of crime. For example, people believe that the capital punishment for the drug dealer is suitable to the crime he/she had been done. It could be beneficial to the government and the community to gain a positive impact, such as, the drug market that has been eliminated after they executed the dealer.
On the other hand, I believe that there are many reason that could be identified as a consideration before deciding the punishment. Firstly, the prosecutor should be verifying the personalities of the offender. There are several offender that have a mental disorder issues, for example is schizophrenia. They could done a homicide under the influence of their mental problem. Secondly, we must respected the rights to live for every people. This includes for the people who committed crime. Instead deciding a capital punishment, the maximum penalties for the criminal is life imprisonment. Finally, the reason and motivation are the important part for the consideration before deciding the sentences. People could be conducted a crime because they are poor, so they forced themselves to become, for example, a robber or drug dealer just to get enough money to live.
In conclusion, people need a certainty of law to prevent a bad crime to be happened. Yet, the punishment should be fair and equitable for the people who committed crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many reasons
...he other hand, I believe that there are many reason that could be identified as a considera...
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Suggestion: several offenders
...ersonalities of the offender. There are several offender that have a mental disorder issues, for...
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Suggestion: offenders
...ties of the offender. There are several offender that have a mental disorder issues, for...
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Suggestion: have done; do
...or example is schizophrenia. They could done a homicide under the influence of their...
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Suggestion: Instead,
...des for the people who committed crime. Instead deciding a capital punishment, the maxi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238505747126 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.169540229885 0.155533422707 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0574712643678 0.0946595960268 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0201149425287 0.0501214627716 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0344827586207 0.0437548338989 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109195402299 0.122226691241 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0459770114943 0.0403226058552 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81752783286 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0402298850575 0.0326793684256 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.149425287356 0.0861772015684 173% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0316091954023 0.021408717616 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014367816092 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1889.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99682539683 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387301587302 0.374742101984 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273015873016 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209523809524 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146031746032 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81752783286 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463492063492 0.56093040696 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.8506885092 60.7387585426 75% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5294117647 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1700761451 49.517814964 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.117647059 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7743622355 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.814263465372 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 45.8309990663 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.75641025641 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501147729483 0.332605444948 151% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.148689125283 0.102741220458 145% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0840604333461 0.0668466124924 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571899034044 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151444746063 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242774766831 0.134430193775 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104915313264 0.0742795772207 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.552332908386 0.324371583561 170% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113625260999 0.0638462369009 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.414986372857 0.228012699653 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664409351361 0.058150111329 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.