Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some people tend to think that there should be an unchangeable detention for each particular crime, some believe that the motivation as so as depends on the situation of the crime that the punishment should be taken out. In this essay, I will look at both of these ideas and give out my opinion.
Firstly, let's look at why some people have an idea that there should be a fixed punishment. The reasonable answer is the time in the hearing will be shortened. Instead of taking time to investigate deeply the case, the court will only need to find the indication of committing crime to taken out a judgement. Besides that, I don't think there is any reason to left back other indicators of the crime scene.
On the other hand, there are several explanations for why the motivations and circumstances of each crime scene would affect on the final judgement. Example, the case that a kid shoot a burglar just to self-defend can not be compared to a case that a punk kills someone to loot their money. Each of these two scenes has it own justified for the action of the criminal and both of it should be taken into account for the court. Addition, this way only satisfied the victim or related one of the victims. Very sure that they don't want the one who killed their family brutally get the same punishment as the one who just defends themselves. Finally, the motivation of the crime sometimes can help the guilty get away from prison if there is a reasonable explanation for the crime they have committed.
On the whole, I totally disagree with the idea that applies fixed punishment for each crime. Every stimulation for the action or proof should all be counted.
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... money. Each of these two scenes has it own justified for the action of the crimina...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61073825503 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53194535163 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2474489061 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438158883281 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141911116142 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129877990351 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281853232456 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587383009569 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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