Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Some people are of a view that tax should not be paid to the state instead people should keep all the money they earn. However, others oppose such view.
Those who believe tax should not be paid points out that paying tax encourages criminal acts. Some people device methods and actions to avoid paying tax. The famous soccer star Lionel Messi exemplifies this precisely. He was charged with fraud after he came up with actions to dodge paying tax. This clarifies that tax promotes fraudulent actions.
Furthermore, it promotes unfairness to the tax payer. Their hard earned income is shared with state. This is evident in majority of countries as they have a standard percentage of taxing workers. This is exploiting to workers as they would not enjoy all the rewards of their hard work.
On the other hand, tax should be paid as the state uses such income for public services. South Africa in particular uses tax money to pay older citizens over 60 years of age. It is so because these individuals are disadvantaged by age and physical fitness to work. Thus this reduces dependency.
Moreover, paying tax reduces the gap between the poor and the rich. The more one earns, the higher the amount of tax, and the lesser income one earns the lesser tax charged. This reduces the rich from being richer and the poorer being poorer.
In conclusion, it is worth noting that paying tax may encourage crime and may seem exploiting to workers. However, I believe the benefits of tax money are far more rewarding to the state and citizens.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'in particular', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244897959184 0.247107183377 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.187074829932 0.155533422707 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0850340136054 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0442176870748 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0374149659864 0.0437548338989 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0952380952381 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0646258503401 0.0403226058552 160% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34406862034 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030612244898 0.0326793684256 94% => OK
Particles: 0.00680272108844 0.00163938923432 415% => OK
Determiners: 0.105442176871 0.0861772015684 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238095238095 0.021408717616 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00340136054422 0.011925033212 29% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1545.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80827067669 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334586466165 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.195488721805 0.28420135186 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131578947368 0.203846283523 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0789473684211 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34406862034 2.80594681477 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.1668944294 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.3 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2559271107 49.517814964 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 127.492653851 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 32.8488721805 49.1944974215 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.50632911392 1.69124875643 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378937460967 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0953697518653 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0939985375865 0.0668466124924 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532545995632 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184895630057 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126414294106 0.134430193775 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978799377489 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220122750243 0.324371583561 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0523302110421 0.0638462369009 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229794865611 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656634176567 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.