Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others think that students of all ages and ability levels should be able to attend universities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often thought that Universities ought to enroll students with excellent grades, whereas others believe students with diverse age groups and abilities should have the opportunity to be accepted by higher education institutions. In my opinion, I consider students should be judged not only by their grades but also by the limitations and constraints they face.
On the one hand, some people think that universities should accept students based on their merits. The reason for this is to ensure the transparency and fairness of the selection process in universities. For example, all higher education institutions in Uzbekistan accept students almost solely based on their performance in the university entrance exams. Besides, this method of selection serves as a motivational tool for children to excel in their academic performance in order to be able to enter higher educational establishments in the future.
On the other hand, it is often believed that universities should select students based on equity and I agree. In other words, the selection committee should offer differentiated opportunities to accommodate diverse students. For example, people who have learning or physical disabilities should also have a chance to get a higher education. Furthermore, applicants from rural areas should be given some privilege to be accepted by a university. This is because, usually, students living in villages have fewer facilities and opportunities for excelling. In the long run, if these students are given the chance to get quality education, upon completion of their studies, they will return to their villages and contribute to the development of those underrated areas.
In conclusion, while people vary in opinions, I think that universities should consider candidates’ abilities and backgrounds to ensure equity in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, whereas, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60283687943 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17474131947 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4892355586 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.538461538 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360583428164 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136088539948 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941103928496 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228074737828 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779292486653 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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