Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is said that the function is the most important factor to take into consideration in architecture’s design, rather than appearance. I disagree with this statement.
It is undeniable that equipping a building with facilities such as air conditioner and lifts to make it convenient and cozy would benefits people who use the building. For example, employees who work in a building without any air conditioner installed would be bothered by extreme hot weather in summer, and their working efficiency, therefore, would considerably dropped. In this regard, installing basic facilities such as air conditioner in workplace is of great importance. Similarly, disabled friendly facilities in public area such as a community library can provide convenience to people with disabilities, making them feel accepted, included and cared. This will contributes to a harmonious relationship among people in this community.
The significance of appearance of the architecture, however, should not be ignored. Adding aesthetic design to the architecture could generate economic benefits if the main function of building were not for residence or work only. For instance, nowadays, high-rise buildings in CBD tend to be the landscape of a city, and making those building attractive, therefore, could lure visitors from other places, promoting the development of local tourism. Also, compared to an average shopping center, the eye-catching one decorated with glossy lights can provide consumers better shopping experience and leave consumers an unforgettable impression, thereby retaining regular consumers more easily.
The above analysis suggests that the relative importance of function and appearance of a building depends on the main purpose of the building, and these two sides are not incompatible. We should combine these two in order to design a building in order to provide users better experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...ts to make it convenient and cozy would benefits people who use the building. For exampl...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'drop'
Suggestion: drop
...ficiency, therefore, would considerably dropped. In this regard, installing basic facil...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
...accepted, included and cared. This will contributes to a harmonious relationship among peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67482517483 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2195051573 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608391608392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4648720331 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138986104344 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537210725622 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644341568823 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108948540255 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890603249378 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.