Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life.Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Steve Jobs, Elon Musks and Bill Gates, who are the founders of the companies, have a big success though they drop out of school. Therefore, they are not only ideal models, but they also prove that school is not only the key to success. There are some reasons why they are influential people in the world.
Interest is the foremost cause that most successful people have. It has made them feel enthusiastic and consistent when they work. It is evident that they contemplate work as a joyfulness and a friend. Steve Jobs said that he could work as much as possible whenever he felt weary providing that he loved this work very much. Further and even more importantly, though, they are ready to face up to new challenges. So enthusiastic are they that new experiences in reality can largely improve their specialization more perfectly than ever before. No matter how difficult and narrow it is, mistakes lay the foundation for success. Broad-minded has helped them overcome many obstacles to the summit of success.
Nevertheless, people will never reach the summit of success without purpose. It largely imprints on the moment of truth when people complete this task. If their purpose is very little, they only achieve in a small limit and vice versa. The power of purpose in Yale University is a well-known instance. Only 5 percents of scholars in Yale University set big goals after graduating while 95 percents did not know what they would do in 20 years later in the final survey in 1917. In 1937, studies showed that the minority of scholars had ideal incomes about seventy thousand dollars while most people had only twenty thousand dollars. Purpose actually shows powerful and long-term benefits.
By ways of conclusion, it cannot be denied that success depends on individual. Specific purpose, enthusiasm and non-stops efforts are decisive factors which make people successful in their life.Whether they drop out of school or not, people can become better than ever before.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Whether
...ch make people successful in their life.Whether they drop out of school or not, people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00604229607 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60704245229 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607250755287 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.118537805 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.85 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161859206202 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465107472793 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476232867496 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103281924137 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407497369689 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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