Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think is has lead to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The technology has advanced a lot, and this can enhance the knowledge of people and offer people job physical more easily. Instead, other people are thinking that is a negative effect for us because the evolution of artificial intelligence can be the end of humanity.
Firstly, in 2000’s, the mobile phone had been used only for making calls or sending text messages, today we can have to access the Internet, play games or use various kind of apps. By accessing the Internet on all kind of devices, which can do that, can help people to find any type of information they want. Also, most of manufactures have an advanced tech equipment which helps them to produce more. People can be taught to use this kind of equipment for making the work easier.
Secondly, the development of technology can affect people which cannot learn how to use it. However, this can lead to decrease of labour force, because companies are looking to gain more profits which means to produce more and this can be done using machines that do not require people. Moreover, if companies invest more and more in technology, they can control everything because almost all devices collect personal information about people and we cannot know sure where they are send it.
In conclusion, the advancement of technology is good thing for us, but we need to select which information is good or not. Also, we can still control how much privacy information we share on the Internet. Therefore, depends on person to decide if the technology has a positive or negative effect on people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: IN_1990s[2]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2000’s'.
Suggestion: in the 2000’s
...can be the end of humanity. Firstly, in 2000’s, the mobile phone had been used only fo...
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the manufactures') or simply say ''most manufactures''.
Suggestion: most of the manufactures; most manufactures
...ny type of information they want. Also, most of manufactures have an advanced tech equipment which h...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
... and we cannot know sure where they are send it. In conclusion, the advancement ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.208053691275 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.187919463087 0.155533422707 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738255033557 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0604026845638 0.0501214627716 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436241610738 0.0437548338989 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0973154362416 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0402684563758 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58152450203 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0335570469799 0.0326793684256 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0838926174497 0.0861772015684 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0436241610738 0.021408717616 204% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0302013422819 0.011925033212 253% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1558.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342105263158 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251879699248 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172932330827 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116541353383 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58152450203 2.80594681477 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556390977444 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.919917861 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1666666667 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1593373077 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 127.492653851 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7743622355 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.814263465372 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 47.3546365915 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.18390804598 1.69124875643 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20892571426 0.332605444948 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125509489417 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0384803286997 0.0668466124924 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604879674562 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102099179507 0.148594505496 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100335168654 0.134430193775 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382289783731 0.0742795772207 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.29079910263 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0565498995156 0.0638462369009 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15060890345 0.228012699653 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163200746055 0.058150111329 28% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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