Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The advertisements have become a source of information about the availability of the products in the market which has benefited organizations as well, however, a number of believe that it has impacted us negatively. In this essay, we will discuss both sides along with the examples and argue the latter one.
On the one hand, commercials and internet ads provide a free source of entertainment, which is quite fun and engaging. It allows viewers to enjoy the content along with the provision of awareness and analyze the competitive prices. In addition to that, this trend of advertisements have created jobs in the marketing department, and assisted organizations achieve a myriad of goals. For example, according to the recent research, if ads are discontinued, it will not only majorly effect the sale of the goods on the contrary also result it unemployment.
On the other hand, advertisers exaggerate and set unrealistic expectations among the teenager and youngsters. As a result, it false images are created in their head which instigate them to make unnecessary purchases. For instance, in the past few decades, a plethora of skin fairness products are widely sold in the market, targeting vulnerable groups, which is a shameless act.
In my opinion, ads use emotional, sexual, and endorsement appeal to make a profit showing complete indifference to the public and their health. Moreover, the majority of the children learn from what they see, and the majority of them are subliminal advertisements, which lure buyers into buying random merchandise and make them materialistic.
To conclude, experts advocate the exposure to ads on daily basis wire the kids brain to function unhealthy habits. It surely outweighs the beneficial influence advertisements are having nowadays on the consumers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33916083916 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14679292872 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8766293809 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.461538462 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977710917044 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031278885469 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299162288734 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487305560654 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205563531809 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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