Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a thought about following either local news or international ones. Although there are rational arguments on both sides of this controversial topic, I will support both opinions since they are inseparable.
The local news is illustrative for the community. The more people follow their regional news, the more they aware of events around them may affect their life. This awareness leading to social cohesion and also encourage the state government to improve the efficiency and decision making. For instance, during the COVID-19 pandemic the news and notifications of each region is unique and practical for themselves, and if the public follow the news from the official sources, it will help the government to proficiently manage the crisis. A good example of this is quarantine durations, vaccination plan and mask usage. Furthermore, there are some general news such as weather, national sports, prices and etc., which are assigned specifically for the residents.
On the other hand, international news is a crucial element in the modern world, since the political and economic changes in one country effect on another. That is to say, reading global news is an excellent way to connect with international words and being knowledgeable about what really happened out there. Moreover, it helps to communicate with other people with various background as it increases the cultural competence. A good example of this is the person who immigrate to other country knowing about their local issues such as politics. Moreover, it allows public a rational and critical thinking about global issues.
All in all, thanks to globalization, following both local and international news are essential, because they are hierarchy relevant and work as a puzzle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 701, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...uch as weather, national sports, prices and etc., which are assigned specifically for th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, really, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36330935252 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90482938323 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8426044519 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298242044861 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920211175341 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552328121905 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159530131415 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354376358735 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.