Some people prefer doing the same things all the time. Others, however, think that changes are necessary.Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
In the contemporary society, some individuals tend to live in daily routine. Nevertheless, some humans argue that transformations are compulsory. This essay will discuss both points of view and seems to agree with the statement that all people must take challenges in their lives.
It cannot be denied that experiencing new activities has an enormous impact on a state of the mind. First and foremost, starting of new hobbies assists to become more broad-minded and enhance health and mentality. For instance, if a person changes the activity from knitting to mountaineering, it will definitely bring benefit to him or her in terms of being more active and calmer. Secondly, moving to a new job helps to change a perspective. For example, if an individual works manually, it will be tedious and tiring to go to a place of working. That is why a new job will improve mood.
Other group of people claims that the stability in life is much better. First of all, being working in the same company enables to become an expert in the field and deserve recognition from colleagues. For instance, being a worker in a Big-4 company for a long period of time assists to acquire huge amount of information. Secondly, for some individuals it is easier to live in stable conditions as it diminishes the level of stress. Moreover, it makes them more confident because situations are more predictable.
Taking everything into account, I therefore conclude that having some adventures in life is necessary and has a positive influence on mood and health.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: period
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Suggestion:
... positive influence on mood and health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98455598456 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94397430188 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.505651711 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140649248956 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417351850273 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476879391096 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896410943532 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599581928498 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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