Some people prefer to a live in house, while others feel that there are more advantages to live in apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house comparing with living in an apartment?
people share a different point of view regarding the place for living. While some people consider that living in a house is more beneficial, others prefer to stay in an apartment. this essay will discuss both the positive and negative sides of these accommodation types.
On the one hand, no doubt living in a house provides various merits such as spacious space which can be used for various purposes such as garden and children’s playground. people enjoying gardening can cultivate various flowers in the garden, in which it can derive psychological advantage such as calming the tension after a hectic day. Moreover, the vacant space also can be functioned as children playing area. this provides the children with an outdoor playground where they can have physical activity during playtime, and it prevents them from having sedentary behaviour. However, one drawback of occupying a house is an economic factor. In recent decades, house maintenance such as water and electricity repairmen has increased rapidly especially in the megacity, and this results in an extra economic burden that occupant has to pay.
On the other hand, for people living in metropolitan cities such as Jakarta, staying in a flat is a better choice since it gives benefits in terms of financial factor and place. Compared to the house, the apartment price is more affordable. So, many people can afford a comfortable accommodation. Furthermore, many apartments are situated in the downtown area. this makes people can access public places such as school and workplace easily. Consequently, people can lessen their time to back and forth and use the time for another activity such as resting.
To sum up, I believe that accommodation preferences are a personal choice, but financial reason and the site should be taken into account when selecting a place for living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, as to, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79018916125 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4273456702 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.25 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243548411804 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080405141244 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10872795235 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140815724735 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886015838272 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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