Some People prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, and others prefer to change their jobs from time to time
Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.
Having a constant occupation or changeable works has always been questionable for most of the people.As far as people try to gain their interesting field of works, many people even by having a appropriate job still thinking to change their jobs in order to achieve something better.In my opinion, staying in a job in long-term period can be boring .Moreover insisting on a one field of work can make you a one-dimensional person.
While group of people assume that changing jobs is not a good idea because of some reasons, other group of people believe that people who change their occupations are more flexible in their life and they are actually more talented.They mention two essential reasons; the first primary reason is that staying on frequent works can lead to adaptation which is problematic for our minds.In addition they say, It is quite common by maintaining your work, people decrease their ability to make a new life.It means, it can go down bravery of people to encounter with new risks.
Against the contrary beliefs of some group of people, the other group of people illustrate the other reasons which show their interests for having a stable job.They impediment reason which they mention is that, they think by staying in a frequent jobs people can head up to a successful way which shows there capacity of passing harsh and good times same together.In addition, they think stable jobs can be prepared new opportunities in a company or organizations which they are working there. Although, without high trying and obtaining goals and also more chances is not possible to improve the level of works, but by using experiences people can lead to their further goals.
To conclude,I’m strongly believe that people can change the quality of their life by changing their attributes about their jobs and work places.Without risks nothing can change the people’s future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07028753994 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79415210363 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549520766773 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.283482702 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 317.4 106.682146367 298% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6 20.7667163134 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 7.06120827912 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300442799675 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180143124802 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696758976606 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211467904641 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415366454105 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.01 50.2224549098 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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