Some people prefer to work for the large company, while others prefer to work for the small company. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
With the proliferation of contemporary society breeds a wide range of choice to develop the career path. Indeed, the question of whether it is better to be employed by a large company, or by small one remains a source of controversy. Although participating in a small and medium- size business is beneficial to some extents, I would argue that working for the large enterprise offers more advantages
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people should apply for the small firm. Firstly, the individuals engaged by these companies could be promoted quickly than those working for the larger corporations. To be more specific, the working environment is less competitive in the small enterprises due to the limited number of employees. As a result of this rapid advancement, the staffs could have an opportunity to be a manager, which may help them to gain many essential expertise and leadership skill is a case in point. Secondly, in small business, people could find it easier to build the relationship among other colleagues, the senior managers in particular. These personal contacts can be a great benefit for them in the further career.
On the other hand, I believe that in spite of numerous advantages of taking part in small enterprises, working for the large companies could result in more favorable outcomes. The most obvious of which are related to job security and the improvement in competence. With regard to the former, the employees in the large firms will enjoy a higher degree of job security. This is due to the fact that profitable companies are less likely to go bankrupt than small start – up operations. Another advantage is that that larger enterprises tend to have well-develop training programs, which are designed to provide the knowledge in the certain fields for the employees. This may help them to obtain plenty of essential skills in their chosen profession.
In conclusion, working for small companies may be advantageous in some ways. It seems to me that applying for the large organizations is a wiser choice to guarantee a successful career in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...ice to develop the career path. Indeed, the question of whether it is better to be employed by a large ...
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun expertise seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much essential expertise', 'a good deal of essential expertise'.
Suggestion: much essential expertise; a good deal of essential expertise
... a manager, which may help them to gain many essential expertise and leadership skill is a case in point...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l skills in their chosen profession. In conclusion, working for small compani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, in spite of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92037039865 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4973117503 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3125 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255105896305 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803101062159 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742640729717 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172869813267 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346472460443 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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