Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that young people under 18 years old should spend all time for studying. Personally, I totally agree with this point of view.
The first reason is that students are able to pay all their attention on studying. Without part-time job or whatever irrelatively to study, students are just responsible for studying hardly and seriously. For example, one of my friends who have a part-time job at coffee shop in the result her learning outcomes are seem to be getting worse compared with the others who study all-time. Therefore, all young people just focus on studying because of being too young to take care a lot of things at the same time.
The second reason is that young students should cultivate whole the knowledge in school because knowledge, an essential element of one's success, is normally acquired through formal education. With a stable foundation knowledge which drives students explore perspective and enhance capabilities. For instance, these students found it easily to orient toward whether or not keep leering after graduating by them. So most young people who study full-time in high shool are prone to keep going in university. It is useful to encourage students to study hard in high school to ready for studying university.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have motioned above, I strongly believe that in order to achieve the best knowledge student should study whole time until they are 18 years old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: seemed
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...udents found it easily to orient toward whether or not keep leering after graduating by them. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ole time until they are 18 years old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05439330544 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60427902076 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610878661088 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6035355068 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239853139766 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934738099645 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103822314618 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183250894851 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832212668472 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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