Some people say that government should pay for the health care but other people say that it is not the governments' responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often discussed that a developed country makes beneficial policies for its people, including completed medical system etc. But there are some people debating that government has no response to pay this bill. From my perspective,everyone should have health insurance regardless of from government or insurance company.
Virtually, it’s necessary for government to provide service for tax payers,from all prospects of life. Firstly, every citizens have contributed to the nation so it’s everyone’s right for free health care. Also, the policy is valuable for those poor people under life pressure. It’s a disaster for them to burden the expensive medical treatment bill. Imaginably,a perfect medical system would promote people’s health index while some people afraid of treatment costs choose to tolerate the pain instead of going for any treatment.
Others have different opinions that governments take no responsibility for it. It is a huge financial expenditure for the country and when governments spend more money on the health care, it is inevitable to reduce the cost to solve other social problems. On the other hand, the medical system with the limited money may have some shortages such as not enough medical resource for all patients. Those governmental hospitals tend to not have enough doctors and nurses, as a result of large work pressure for those medical workers also a long time waiting for patients.
To be frank, the government should provide health welfare as much as possible, but people should not take it as all powerful. To prepare for some special conditions, people can choose one of health insurance from insurance company.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40684410646 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92505430567 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585551330798 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0940523112 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339907917062 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127933085545 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573226393254 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219433889378 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299956210308 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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