some people say that history subject the waste of time of student. But other believe that history subject is the best way to know about past. Discuss both side and give your opinion
Education plays a significant role to make successful career because education set's the foundation of supreme career. Presently; some proportion of people assert that nowadays student are reading history subject in school which is waste of time of them. But other have conflicting views. Here; i would like to account for both sides with my own notion.
There are manifold points to shore up to former view. First and foremost; modern era student are reading history subject. For example; children are reading history of mahatma Gandhi than other science math and so on. As a result; student can ...
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because education set's the foundation of supreme career.
because education sets the foundation of supreme careers.
which is waste of time
which is a waste of time
to shore up to former view
to shore up to the former view
student can not give proper time to other subjects than history which waste of time of them.
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due to the less interest which waste the time of them.
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there are several view to support to later view.
there are several views to support to the later view.
student read history of freedom fighter during the history classes who have contributed to take freedom in 1857 and1947 in India
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so everyone take education.
so everyone takes education.
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