Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
As society develops and becomes globalised, learning a foreign language becomes necessity. While obtain the ability of speak of other language can be useful for the employment and the entertainment reasons, it cannot deny that there are other reasons to learn a foreign language. In my view, even though there are various reasons to learn other languages such as social contact and partners, the primary reason is the employment and the entertainment.
In this modern era, the world has becoming globalised. Due to this globalisation, people can travel and communicate with foreigners easily and convenient. As a result of this, learning a new language becomes important in order to communicate effectively with foreigners.
There are various reasons for learning a new language. Due to globalisation, people can easily have a foreign partner or make an international social group and which all are required to learn other languages in order to communicate. For example, there are a high proportion of international marriages in Australia and those non-Australian partners required to speak English in order to communicate with their partners. This can be the same for friends and families. Therefore, other reasons to learn a foreign language are inevitable.
However, the primary reasons could be the employment and the entertainment. Majority of people are travel to other countries for the business or trip reasons. According to the US statistics, about 60% of oversea trip was for the relaxation and about 30% of those were involved of business reasons. Like this, travelling to overseas become the most popular entertainment activities in this modern era.
I believe that, even though the other reasons are existed, all the basic roots are back to the employment and the entertainment. In the case of friends, partners and families, it can be considered as the entertainment reasons because by learning a foreign language, people can go to travel to other countries with them. Therefore, all the other reasons are the sub reasons for the main reason of the employment and the entertainment.
In conclusion, as the world becomes globalised there are various reasons to learn a foreign language. Despite all the other reasons, the most vital reasons are the travelling and for the work.
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as for', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239024390244 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.141463414634 0.155533422707 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10487804878 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0341463414634 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0146341463415 0.0437548338989 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112195121951 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0390243902439 0.0403226058552 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05588603969 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0414634146341 0.0326793684256 127% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.124390243902 0.0861772015684 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.019512195122 0.021408717616 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00243902439024 0.011925033212 20% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2295.0 1933.35771543 119% => OK
No of words: 366.0 316.048096192 116% => OK
Chars per words: 6.27049180328 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387978142077 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327868852459 0.28420135186 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226775956284 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153005464481 0.137316102897 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05588603969 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407103825137 0.56093040696 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.6505004828 60.7387585426 69% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0459281587 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.7743622355 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.0868852459 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.05128205128 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403662544359 0.332605444948 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145050399891 0.102741220458 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0982125383373 0.0668466124924 147% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.60316478804 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166723868138 0.148594505496 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183062078432 0.134430193775 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653543893136 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421387252532 0.324371583561 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.165568493481 0.0638462369009 259% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284561777876 0.228012699653 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635897585425 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.68436873747 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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