Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child‘s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Human development is a complex interplay of many factors. Many people tend to believe that only parents are responsible for development of their children whereas others opine that friends
And other environmental factors such as TV can be make children more rounded as a person. It is necessary to look at both side of argument before forming an opinion.
Parents have direct interactions with the children. Parents teach how to live life and train them. Parents can show that how to behave with other. They also play an important role in the socializing process of the child. In addition that children copy daily activity from their parents and follow them. Children’s lifestyle can be shape perfectly by parents. They can provide critical input better than anyone else. That is why it is believed by some that parents have the strongest role in a child‘s development.
On the other hand, friends are involve in every children life and they help to grow emotionally and socially. Children find out who they are by comparing themselves to others. They learn about attitude, character and personality. Furthermore, children can get chance to learn how to handle any kind of problem with help of friends. When friends are around with children, every child feel a sense of wellbeing and experience fewer social problems. Children can’t feel loneliness. Sometime children can’t tell their problems to their parents but they can share their personal problems to their friends. Television is also one of the most effective media in kids’ life. How much impact TV has on children depends on many factors : how much they watch, with whom they watch ,alone or with adults and so on.
In my opinion, we can’t say that only parents are responsible for better growth and development of children. Children have to live with their friends and children also can get knowledge from TV. Children can watch technical channel on TV and gain better knowledge. Children can learn lesson of respect, behavior from their parents and learn about love, naughtiness from their friends.
All thing consider, there are different benefits to live with parents and friends.TV have its distinct pron. Personally, I believe that mixture of all factors can make children’s bright future and make them more rounded as a person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ow much they watch, with whom they watch ,alone or with adults and so on. In my o...
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...and make them more rounded as a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, whereas, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16094986807 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71879678455 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517150395778 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0179749201 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2307692308 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5769230769 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164322856697 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578179675143 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623365902378 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098413453061 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044894826337 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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