Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. What is your opinion?
Commercials can assist the TV audience in a myriad of ways; however, others hold a different opinion. I believe that advertisements are broadcasted merely to promote a product that does nothing more than public entertainment. In this essay, I will state my opinion and include supporting examples.
Adverts are displayed to sell the goods and services to the potential buyer. It can provide a few minutes of free entertainment with minimal product information. Advertisers mostly exaggerate the ads to grapple with the stores' competitive prices, and these sources should not be considered credible for product information sold in the market. For example, fairness creams cannot make you look fair in ten days, or a cologne wearer cannot possibly make the angels fall from heaven. That is why TV advertisements are highly unreliable to check the products' and services' authenticity.
In my opinion, advertisements only confuse people by introducing a variety of products to the consumers. A viewer is mainly exposed to, on average, a thousand ads daily, which clearly fill their minds with jingles and subconsciously make them purchase nonessential items. Moreover, advertisers use emotional and endorse appeal to connect with the watchers as their main agenda is to survive in the competitive market and run a profitable business. For instance, if an eminent celebrity endorses a random product, it will trigger most of the audience to possess the advertised item. As a result, it makes the purchasers materialistic and deprive them to understand their actual needs.
To conclude, it is advocated by the experts that advertisements are amusing to watch and nothing more than a gimmick to attract the public and make the client-base.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11728638084 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629090909091 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9240269776 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158505085371 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523249447431 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450025391276 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883068801497 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350700954333 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.