Some people say that TV advertisements have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discu3both sides, give your opinion and include examples from your own experience
Tv advertisements Nowadays cover every aspect of people's life. From fast food to pain killers,even home furnitures and pets accsorice. It's a whole world of sales and offers brought to people of the comfort of their homes. I believe that TV commurtuls has benefits people's life positively.
Tv ads was a chanale programmes time announcement back in the day.then companies started to airs their product to target more consumers and they succeed. People started to notice and people compaies begin to combet,who made ads that attract more people. For example, the Aspirin medicine ads. It was one of the first ads that effect so many lives for the better.
Some might argue that ads is not really that beneficial. They clime that it's fake and artificial. They prefer to look up for products that is not on the spotlight of the Tv and media. assuming that ads products are all bad and unconvient setting the Kardashin make up as an example.
Overall Tv ads has proved a positive and tangible advantage on the life of people, even the ones who claim not to.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83606557377 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5961403004 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2285182172 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0769230769 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104574877656 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399642681219 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427696011239 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614644404929 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047433633643 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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