Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
Nowadays, choosing a correct filed is one of the fundamental decision in each person’s life. While some have a conviction that interest should play key role in this regard, other believe students should be forced into certain objects. This essay will elaborate how both of the aforementioned viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, and I think in spite of some advantages of the second statement, students should freely select their major.
First and foremost, undoubtedly being success is ultimate target of each student. Hard-working and good knowledge are the factors which constitute successful people. The more people like their job, the more they put into effort to learn more and progress in their study, however the path might be not easy. For instance, finding a suitable job becomes an instant challenge corresponding to some majors but finally they have a career with high satisfaction. Furthermore, future is unpredictable and it would be highly possible that some subjects replace the current popular areas such as medicine and technology, therefore, it will be more rational if people have the great exposure to various fields.
Another vital point which needs to be taken into consideration is that many countries are coping with high unemployment rate which is the direct consequence of studying in the unwanted subjects. Job opportunities significantly boost when student are seeking a position in high demand area. Consequently, they can gain more prosperity which leads to better high quality life. Moreover, extra tools are available for people educating in particular pre-defined majors which helps them to expand their knowledge and skills. Different classes, high quality equipment and various inline sources are only a few examples of dozens facilities which can support these students and that is why they can simply have a job regardless of high competition.
On the basis of the points mentioned above although the path of study in desired subject would be difficult, I strongly believe that youths should follow their passion to bring beneficial of it to the society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in particular, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32934131737 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82188606855 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61377245509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4451834459 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26257691949 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079765253425 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617244491993 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156345243483 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410381239988 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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