Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say that nowadays this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the question of whether to apply for a university or not to apply for it remains a source of controversy in social life. While the community believes that university is not a great way to be successful, I would argue that studying at a university is a way to secure the future.
On the one hand, the option of not gaining admission to an educational institution is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, people who already have a start-up plan can run their own business. For instance, there are several billionaires such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs who dropped out and created numerous large corporations. Secondly, doing what people like or getting real-life experience can also help them be professional. Sometimes, people learn skills that they feel necessary for a successful goal. For example, Ronaldo is a famous soccer player who does not even have a degree, but he learns skills by himself and becomes the greatest in soccer. Therefore, getting a certification from a university is not the only way to be successful.
Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, I believe that academic education is a better choice for those who want to gain achievements. Firstly, students have a chance to improve their knowledge. University gathers well-known professors that have professional experience and help students to deal with such problems as assignment difficulties, career advice, and personal matters. Secondly, people can develop both communication skills and social skills. As the university has various kinds of clubs, students may gain skills from those valuable sources and also build relationships which may be crucial for students. Therefore, the effectiveness of academic education may not be the only measure, but it plays an important role in everyone‘s success.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have validity, it seems to me that it is better to take part in university education than making money after high school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
It is true that the question of whether to apply for a university or not to app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22327044025 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00655409218 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581761006289 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1352574214 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184013587048 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612024672059 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462633674525 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115101142614 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226660752813 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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