There is a contentious dispute over the issue of crime reduction throughout the globe in this era. Some people claim that extension of prison time is the most ideal policy regarding alleviation in crime commitment. Others persistently hold the opposite view and assert that there are various ways in order to refrain people from doing crime. To me the idea of latter party seems more appealing. In this essay, I am going to delve into both points of view.
On the one hand, in favor of the first party, intensification in the prison punishment would result in decline in the illegal activities and criminals. From long time ago, alongside financial penalties, person was one of the alternatives to reform delinquents, although it wasn’t always effective. Not only it contributed to ruin the culprit life, but it would also lead to detrimental effects on them with respect to being isolated from their pursuit and education. SO, people not anymore think of doing crimes according to its outcomes. However, it is not viable way in order to achieve noticeable decrease in crime occurring. For example, according to the recent survey conducted by X university, 60 percent of crime committed throughout X city in 2016 leaded by individuals experienced prison sentences formerly.
On the other hand, it is widely announced that they are more efficient practices that inevitably lead to more bright results. Something has to be done by heads of the nations in term of informing people culturally. Hence, it would be viable if they proceed to commence performing amendment from primary schools. For instance, Tehran municipality has implemented a precious program last year in all schools all over the districts in 2016. They employed a large number of prominent psychologists that detect children susceptible to committing hazardous activities. Then, they begin intensive consultation. Now, the results have revealed that rate of crime had a dramatic fall.
To sum up, it is transparently manifest that long jail punishment could be effect in reduction of crimes somehow, although it would have immense negative effect in communities and it is not solely sufficient. It would be wise i f they initiate from earlier time and make children aware of unethical activities no matter how insignificant it is.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 453, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19839142091 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95377639209 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608579088472 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9179917574 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.95 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165173732494 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486975062927 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057566140368 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.098413772617 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737833647992 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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