Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations. Other think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion
Many people believe that third word countries need financial support from international community whereas the opposite view claims that those nations need practical aids and strategic recommendations. While practical aid and policies advice have their own merists, I would argue that money aid plays an integral role in supporting poor countries.
On the one hand, practical aids and strategy advice are extremely importance for developing countries. One reason is that, practical aids such as vaccines, medical and necessities support are needed to resolve with existence difficulties. For example, thousand vulnerable children in Africa have been saved by International aids of International Cross Organization or Doctors Without Borders Organization during their aids which have rescued them from diseases and starvation. Other reason is that most of national leaders have their own visions but strategy advice and consultants from international experts could help them optimizing their management policies which might have possitive impacts to all aspects of their countries. As a result, all functions of those nations would be operated effectively and efficiently then leading to prosperity for their citizens.
On the other hand, I would argue that financial support from international community plays a significant role for poor
nations. Firstly, if the governments had enough money in their budgets, they could promote small businesses for people by loaned with low interest rate. As the result, many people can made ends meet and the stop poverty cycle. Secondly, traffic infrastructure in poor countries could be improved by investing aid money to building concrete roads, highways and bridges which could connect the remote areas to cities. Therefore, trading and traveling could be developed and the economy will be increased since the more convenient traffic is the better for economy development. Furthermore, aid money could be used to improving educational system and so that universal education could be implemented. When children are educated and armed necessary knowledge, that could help them have career prospects in the future.
In conclusion, although specified aid and consultant are beneficial in some ways for developing countries, I believe that that financial support is better for third word countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...th existence difficulties. For example, thousand vulnerable children in Africa have been...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to optimize' or 'optimize'.
Suggestion: to optimize; optimize
...m international experts could help them optimizing their management policies which might h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69714285714 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93396715478 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545714285714 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7658176245 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.933333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214786280366 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774410531758 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062386130753 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135422036186 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069175719248 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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