Some people think that the government have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People often hold different views about who should bear the responsibility of guarantee citizens a balanced diet. While some people claim that it is the obligation of national leaders, I believe that individuals are responsible for the quality of products which they consume.
On the one hand, there are plausible explanations of why it is necessary that the government make their residents consume proper food. Firstly, a healthy diet depends primarily on foods available in the market, and for this reason it would be necessary for the government to set regulations on food supplies. Without governmental control, citizens would find it difficult to know which foods are safe for their meals. The second reason is that if the government don’t interfere in order to improve the health of the country, they would ultimately have to allocate a large amount of national budget to combat the health epidemic. For example, in America, the number of obese people is increasing at an alarming rate due to lack of food and nutrition guidance from the authority, which makes the public health center ends up paying for medical costs/healthcare expenses and solving health disorders.
On the other hand, it seems to me that it’s personal duty to lead healthy eating habits. If citizens become dependent upon government for health care and education then they ultimately become dependent on the government for everything in their lives. This would lead to a disastrous outcome in any nation because the governmental body cannot support all of its citizens. Moreover, it is difficult to define what qualifies a healthy lifestyle, because every individual has different physical condition. As a result, different proper dietary choices should be chosen on an individual basis, and the government’s role is to guide people to make their own choices by providing sufficient information about health.
In conclusion, although goverments should dictate in what people eat, I believe that it’s personal duty to adopt healthy lifestyle to protect their own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33435582822 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91690050483 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.3216540334 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165857339939 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612623818915 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388812752845 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10948102255 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439255734814 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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