Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extend do you agree …
One of the most challenging hot issues which has recently considered by a group of people is about the amount of money which spend on arts by the government .It is common argued that the expenditure which spend in this area is basically waste of money,While others believe that it is a pessimistic view and arts play key role in culture and traditional spotlights.In my opinion,I believed that although we should care about money expenditure in all fields, overall arts should not be ignored by government .
As long as we know, arts play a critical role in people’s life.There are vast majority of art’s fans among the world.A group of people mentioned two essential reason to prove to importance of arts.The primary important reason is about culture and traditional concept.They assume that, in a society with even urban appearance, art show the depth of our culture and integrity of that with our traditional history.For instance,Egypt which is one of the ancient country in the world bring lots of visitors to annually which can show the power oof arts.Moreover, They assume that, people have constantly been the fan of art,Although, they may concern about money expenditure in this criteria but they are more interested to expand it as much as they can.For example,In China people donate 10 $ In a year to government to intensify the development of arts in order to maintain their interesting history.
However, there are also negative ideas which should be considered.A group of people illustrate two essential reasons.The first issue is that government should obtain priority about money expenditure.This means that by having various problems in society government should know their preferences.For instance, global warming has been one of the recent issues which government do not consider it.By comparison , They argue that , global warming is much more important than arts.Secondly.They say that by investing money in others field government can earn more money due to better convenience for there people.
In conclusion, while money spending in art category have a high cost for government, they can also be beneficial for people and their culture.In my opinion, despite having some adverse effects of spending money in art,I believe that art is a initial rout of our culture and must be kept by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.216 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04012976886 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525333333333 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 93.0 20.2975951904 458% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 218.099031405 49.4020404114 441% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 489.0 106.682146367 458% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 93.75 20.7667163134 451% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.06120827912 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245913543573 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170220870516 0.084324248473 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352314752214 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170220870516 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352314752214 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.0 13.0946893788 382% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -22.92 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.6 11.3001002004 350% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.18 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.12 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.2 10.1190380762 387% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 40.0 10.7795591182 371% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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