Some people think healthcare should be made free for all people, while others believe people should pay for healthcare by themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Medical system plays an important role in public services. People always pay more attention on the policy of healthcare and some of them support that there should be a free access to hospitals. However, others may think medical fees should be paid by people themselves. Two different opinions both have their advantages.
Firstly, if free healthcare is set in one region, it is no doubt that the average life span in this region will increase. Because people, especially the poor, will not worry about the medical fee. People will be more willing to go to hospitals because they are free, which enables doctors to find potential risks in patients and prevent some chronic diseases. Besides, free access to the healthcare also allows interns in hospital to have more chance to diagnose a variety of patients for more people will come to hospitals. Interns can start from diagnosing some slight diseases and this allows them to gain practical experience, contributing to the medical quality.
But some supporters of self-paid medical treatment may think that if people pay their own fee of the medical care, the burden on the taxpayers will reduce. Governments will use revenue to fund hospitals if they are free, and this action will indirectly affect taxpayers. If people pay their own budgets, hospitals will have the source of income and may run by themselves. It is also good for economy because hospitals will also provide profits.
My opinion is that governments can reduce the cost of medical treatment but never set it for free. Some policy like ‘people with different income level may enjoy different cost of medical care’ can be made to help ensure that everyone in country can get the access to the hospital without increasing the burden on taxpayers dramatically.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'free access'.
Suggestion: free access
...me of them support that there should be a free access to hospitals. However, others may think...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241590214067 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.152905198777 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100917431193 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0366972477064 0.0501214627716 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.039755351682 0.0437548338989 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122324159021 0.122226691241 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0183486238532 0.0403226058552 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60346045102 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.039755351682 0.0326793684256 122% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825688073394 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0581039755352 0.021408717616 271% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00305810397554 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1788.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06101694915 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389830508475 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284745762712 0.28420135186 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183050847458 0.203846283523 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135593220339 0.137316102897 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60346045102 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525423728814 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.0478024995 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8697683633 49.517814964 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.2 127.492653851 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.1412429379 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230477451514 0.332605444948 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11966967192 0.102741220458 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.100373228884 0.0668466124924 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514305505119 0.534860350844 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161733812526 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974780087465 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816420300802 0.0742795772207 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.305759739422 0.324371583561 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0409470270018 0.0638462369009 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17266747725 0.228012699653 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831982245201 0.058150111329 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.