Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Air pollution is the biggest problem for the people in current generation and it would increase more and more if it has not been stopped. Some people think that global car-free day is the best way to get decrease pollution .I believe that other effective methods should be taken into considerations.
If people do not travel by car on that day, they have to use public transport such as walking, bus or subway. After that, these environmentally – friendly transportation can become their preferred choice.There is a common benifit that a car-free day can reduce air-pollution . the carbon dioxide emission from exhausted may be cut off
I think the car-free day is not enough to severe air contamination. the government should improve higher taxes on cars like it has been many developing countries. Only after this policy is applied can fewer people afford cars, and consequently car density on roads fall with the decline of emissions.
In conclusion, the program that encourage motorists to give up their cars for one day is a good idea to deal with air pollution, but government need to simultaneously take other measures such as car price increase and encourage use public transportation, invest in energy-efficient engines
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13366336634 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08939660374 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663366336634 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1558935019 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288917310149 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113596257172 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087450436013 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163190180705 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567843958559 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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