Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is argued that whether living in a horizontal city or a vertical city would be better. While I agree that living in a vertical city has many benefits, I believe that it is best to live in a vertical city.
On the one hand, a vertical city brings lots of advantages. Cities nowadays seem to be quite over-populated. The great population means that more and more land needed to build houses and other buildings, Living in high buildings would save the land for other purposes, such as for public usage. Thanks to high building, the price of accomodation would be reduced, too. In addition, living higher is enable people to breath fresher air, compared with the polluted air at lower ground.
On the other hand, I believe that it is best to live in a horizontal city. It is safer when emergencies occur in lower buildings. For example, in the fire, escaping from a private house would be easier than from the skycraper. Morever, people living in high building usually have to pay a great amount of money for many services, such as maintenance service and building service. This spending would decrese when living in a private house so that people can have more money to do more important things like pursuing higher education.
In conclusion, although living in a vertical city is beneficial, it seems to me that living in a horizontal city would be the best choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1131.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7125 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62802405177 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504166666667 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6957137411 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247616147598 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106681388059 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105936675081 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196037673871 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884513360229 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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