Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature such as novels and poems To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Ode, poetries and stories are often quite engaging, however, a few are of the opinion that the time spent on studying these topics does not aid in acquiring valuable knowledge. I partially disagree with this statement because such an educational branch of liberal arts can arouse emotional awareness and empathy.

it cannot be denied that all kinds of romance, fictional or horror books are infused with a plethora of emotions like love, fear, and pain which altogether generate a sense of self-identification, also helps the readers to recognize sentiments. these attributes are imperative to be a responsible and kind citizen because nowadays, mankind is lacking general social manners and oblivious of morally correct behavior. Teenagers must understand the importance of sensitivity towards others at the earliest. For instance, specializing in a field doesn't guarantee perfection but it certainly gives more edge over others.

There is no doubt that some of the learners have an inclination towards such subjects, moreover, it is found enthralling to them. however, on the other hand literature is not enjoyed by all and it is rather an imposition. it is better to make it an optional part of the course instead of mandating it. For example, sports cannot be made a compulsory unit of a curriculum as not every child is physically suitable or enthusiastic to learn anything on this matter. that is why it is not very wise to have every pupil use their energy and time in an uninterested the area.

To conclude, every academic education is worth spending time with as long as it keeps the interest and provides the required knowledge the learner is seeking for.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1204379562 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95568392283 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653284671533 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6078544649 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.916666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0946201170208 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305550793689 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242632725145 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055613936511 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256943796127 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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