Some people think that the media should stop detailed reporting of crime. What is your opinion?
Recent decades , through a wide range of media, people are likely to have a more clear picture of various crimes. Although some people subscribe to the belief that the medial should report details of crime, this is a common misconception we need to clean it up. I personally believe we should stop report different crime in details.
Those who believe the media should cover more information about crime to the public hold a view the more crime details they have the better they can protect themselves from defenders. Another reason is that some people it that the public have freedom to know the details of crime and it is their basic right so they demand for all details.
In contrast, some sound arguments can be made in defense that media should not expose details of crime. Firstly it is especially true in order to increase audience rating, some media always cover more details of crime. This will be detrimental to audience`s physical and mental health, especially young audience as medial showing many thrilled and violent images about the crime on television or the Internet. Consequently, they might feel disappointed about our society. Furthermore, other criminals will get a lessen learn from details reported by the media and become more tricky. As result, it is hard for police and others from law enforcement to trace and arrest them after committing a crime. Last but not at least, it is unfair to victims. without the agreement of victims, media would not expose their names and photos to the public. To victims, those practices would result in spiritual injury,privacy violations and damaged reputation.
Given above arguments, although sharing more information about crime details, to some extend can help people to avoid detriments from the criminals, it pose a serious threat on our society. People should not ignore the adverse side-effect of this practice. So that I am convinced this practice is undesirable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, at least, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1065830721 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67995853221 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9020319789 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8235294118 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334568904609 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106235547254 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897008095618 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218762918534 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754153481795 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.