Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
In the today’s world, the majority of people have considered widely function of museums as a debatable concern. While some people think that museums are places for searching entertainment, others believe that role of museums is education. In this essay, I will discuss some valid opinions on both sides.
On the one hand, it true that museums bring lots of entertainment for people. Museums are the tourist attractions where a plenty of objects are exhibited to people can see. At this places, many pictures and statures that facsimile actually are displayed. In other words, we always like seeing actual things than reading them in books. Therefore, museums attract a great number of visitors for entertainment.
On the other hand, some people think that museums should be concentrate on education. Museums help people to expand knowledge about history and culture. For instance, if students visit museums, they can know clearly about history’s events and their country’s culture. Specifically, practical learning makes social subjects more interesting and easy to remember. In addition, observing artifacts and pictures depicting the truth about war helps students promote love of homeland inside.
In conclusion, in my opinion museums should bring not only interesting entertainment but also educational benefits for visitors so that they feel pleasurable and learn something at there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58878504673 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94262321007 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658878504673 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.150237248 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4285714286 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335597791862 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115004874832 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118549813768 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197685205413 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10285257078 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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