Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Some people believed that school is the good environment where students can learn to be good parts of the society, while the opponents of this idea think that parenting is more necessary for developing of children. I would argue that parents play more important roles than schools in the education of children.
On the one hand, schools have many experiences and professional skills for educating students. Firstly, transmission of knowledge is high effective at school with teachers. In other words, if students meet their friends and their teachers, they will form different behaviors with many people. Secondly, schools set the strict standard for process of study. Therefore, students must have continuous assessment to make the grade as requirements of schools.
On the other hand, it seems to me that parenting is the most important key so that children become helpful people in the society. Mothers and fathers are always close to their offspring, so their children obey them. Young children are usually easy to teach because parents spend lots of time for them. Additionally, youngsters are easily affected by their parents. As a result, they will imitate attitudes and habits of parents which can take form character of children.
In conclusion, while schools brings much knowledge for students, it seems to me that the contribution of parents for parenting their offspring is more effect on children’s behavior in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Mothers and fathers are always close to their offspring, so their children obey ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32173913043 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79896348625 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5870323096 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220482547239 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741347020588 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873658132265 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148140435436 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103490718575 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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