Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is generally known that are two kinds of education nowadays, parenthood education and conventional school education. Some group of society may give privilege to school in shaping good attitude among children, and others may exclude the school and give an opportunity to parents.
Both educations system may have a similar goal but have different in process and follow the different attitude in a result. The kids who spend most of their day in school may practice the given theory of school's regulation, as such dressing cloth to wear, time-schedule attendance, and other rules that student must behave. In another hand, home-education children begin to choose whatever they want as long as their parent do not confront of their action. There are no regulation to dress cloth, time regulation of attendance, homework, and other obligations that may burden the pupils.
The restricted rule may lead the pupils to become discipline man when they grow up. In another hand, a freedom education, parenthood education, overwhelms the kids to become an open-minded man. Both constitute the different personal. In some ways, those personality impact on children in reconciling some problems. The discipline children may cure the problem in the hand of law. In another hand, liberal children may fix the issues with one-to-one fixing problem, as such, dialogue.
First of all, I truly agree on both system education. However, in my opinion, to become a good member of society, the liberal people cannot sustain the traditional rule which is governed by surrounded dwellers who live in. They may change the restricted rule in other to preserve it. In another hand, the discipline man cannot be compromised to ensure the freedom. A clash between two groups may lead to chaos due to leak of dialogue, restricted man always handle it by force or military. Above all, school education and parenthood education may succeed to make a well-educated kid but it is not a promising factor to reconcile the problem within society. Therefore, it needs to mix both systems in our agreement of different understanding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'educations'' or 'education's'?
Suggestion: educations'; education's
...d give an opportunity to parents. Both educations system may have a similar goal but have...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this personality' or 'those personalities'?
Suggestion: this personality; those personalities
...e the different personal. In some ways, those personality impact on children in reconciling some ...
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Line 4, column 741, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r agreement of different understanding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16715542522 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87978032738 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554252199413 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.59706205 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139116355523 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434455495387 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460713822276 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935494827793 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361554152131 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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