Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that the question of whether physical strength or mental attitude remains a source of controversy in the success in sport. While a number of people believe that mental attitude is more important, I would argue that physical strength is the basis of success in sport.
On the one hand, nobody can deny the importance of mental strength. Firstly, having a strong mental attitude provides motivation and determination for sporters to train hard. It usually takes athletes a long time to practice, which is boring and challenging. Therefore, without a strong mind, sportspeople can not focus on training and completing goal challenges. Secondly, it is a strong mind that helps professional athletes to overcome disappointments and failures. Hardships and failures are things that athletes have to face regularly in the professional sports industry. As a result, being mentally strong stimulates sportspeople to gain more achievements.
On the other hand, I believe that physical strength is the basis of success in sport. The reason for this is that some sports require people to have strong physical health such as boxing, weightlifting, and football. Unlike those who take up a sport to keep fit and stay healthy, it is a compulsory requirement for professional athletes to maintain strong physical health to beat their opponents. For instance, several sports stars even take drugs to improve their strength before the competition to rank higher, risking their career. Obviously, being strong in physical health is the foundation of success in sport.
In conclusion, although being strong mentally and physically/both maintaining a strong mental attitude and physical power are necessary for the achievement in sport, it seems to me that the most important thing is physical strength.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
It is true that the question of whether physical strength or mental attitude re...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e to face regularly in the professional sports industry. As a result, being mentally s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37809187279 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02196795599 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512367491166 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7129875858 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312872810015 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115212906805 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957650917418 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216249872292 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746019356297 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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