Some people think that radio has become out-of-date, and there is no need to listen to the radio for entertainment and news. Do you agree or disagree? OR
With the development of media online, there is no future for radio. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Communication technology has been growing rapidly therefore some people believe that radio had out of style and it is better to approach other media for enjoyment and get news instead of radio. However, I disagree with the statement for many factors and explain them in detail below.
On the one hand, the radio has several benefits compared to other forms of media. Most importantly, it would be programmed with many stations which can be tuned in according to the listener's interest without the remote controller. It can be used simply by any person irrespective of age barriers such as the elderly and children. Similarly, the radio is a small device that is easy to carry and can be installed into vehicles thereby listening to radio news and music while driving would be a pleasurable experience and knowledge. For instance, weather forecasts and traffic alerts would be announced every five minutes on many radio stations. Furthermore using radio is not only an information medium but also it would be a nostalgic emotional feeling to many.
Nevertheless, some people object to the benefits or avoid the importance of radio. This is because of the burgeoning development of information technology and smartphone emissions. This gadget would be efficient and convenient for every situation and circumstance. Advanced news and updates are uploaded now and then in mobile apps and users can utilize the development in the long run.
To sum up, indeed the growth of communication media is marvelous though, the real down-to-earth feeling would be inevitable and convenience are noted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 645, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ry five minutes on many radio stations. Furthermore using radio is not only an information ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21011673152 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9159004501 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0125150607 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221152190373 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812220569394 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627149169449 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134392938155 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828072440301 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.