Some people think that there should be some strict control about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Noise has remained one of most controversial issues, with no conclusive resolution. Some people faced with apparent paradox. While some people ascertain that a nexus exists between the level of noise and heavy controlling, other based on their foregone experience claim that there is not a straight correlation between how much people want to produce noise and restriction of government these days.
It is clear that there are some reasons why the government have to limit the amount of noise produced by people and vehicles. The first reason is that hearing noises constantly affects people’s health such as headache and making nervous. As a result, people at home or work have struggles without clear reasons or students at school do not concentrate on their lessons exactly because it is allowed to people having behaviour without considering their neighbours. For instance, some young are interested in singing when showering. Therefore, their neighbours are not able to have a rest adequate.
On the other hand, it is understandable that it is not ban people to make noise as much as possible. Firstly, making noise such as cheering for football is one of the way to release the high level of stress of work or study sometimes or karaoke singing make people relax. Secondly, there are some solution modern to block some noises. For example, walls and window new could ban the sound of cars and trains. Eventually, people can listen music at home loudly without disturbing others.
In conclusion, although there are reasons to control the disturbing noise existed through industrial activities, it is better to permit people in order to have freedom in their daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14181818182 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71048408351 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1407674447 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214294596615 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809625076164 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537788686304 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131732017361 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489425976883 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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