some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both of view and give your opinion
people have different views with regard about noise. While somepeople agree thtat they have a right to make noise as much as they want, i believe that noise will harm others if it can not be restricted at the certain level.
there are some primary reasons why people prefer to make a loud sound . First, noiseis likely to be indispensable in the entertainment area, especially at music concerts or recreation center. In order to arouse the dynamic ambience within music performence, coordinator certainly have to turn on the sound loudly aiming to make the crowd become excited and immersed into the concert. Second, ethnical festivals use the noise resembles as cultural features. For example, Tribes utilize noise for replicating the historical events happened in the past such as the sound from copper drums which were used like a tool stimulating the spirit of soldiers in the north of Viet Nam for thousands years ago.
However, if goverments dont have stringent measures to restrict noise in public, it will have detrimental impacts on a cuople of sectors. From educational perspective, the loud sound in classroom stemmed from ventilation or surrounding environment will surely distract pupils, and they can not concentrate on their studies. In addition, officers in companies also are influenced by noisy sound. The location of the companies, for instance, usually are in the busy street in which the noise from vehicals can make their focus on works become more diffecult and reduce thier productivity.
In conclusion, depend on the purposes of using noise and where noise was used for, governments will enact the policies to manage noisy sound appropriately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2037037037 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79039995081 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637037037037 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4349115588 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166578528757 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632369482546 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687811627065 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113028012052 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992048784935 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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