some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workspace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Some people believe that universities should accommodate graduates who have enough skills and wisdoms related to industry while, others think that the main function of universities is getting access to knowledge for its own sake. In my opinion, there is a delicate balance between these two functions which have been implementing simultaneously.
On the one hand, knowledge is a means of developing human activities and discovering new horizons. Without using updated technologies, which comes from knowledge, people are not able to cope with limited resources to feed the rising population. People are improving their settlements and providing more foods and ingredients by virtue of new achievements in knowledge. Hence, universities should encourage students to continue their educational level in order to tackle these contemporary pitfalls.
On the other hand, people should have right to expand their horizons regardless the industry’s demand. Some individuals, for example, come back to the academic atmosphere to learn new things based on their interests after retirement. they are enthusiastic about learning new things and the process of learning is enjoyable for them. So, universities should advocate for their right.
In conclusion, universities beside providing intelligent employers to push back the frontiers in industries, should provide the needed infrastructure for everyone who keen to learn. In addition, the culture would be improved as long as people are motivated to broaden their wisdom and it would has positive effects on further aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
...ed on their interests after retirement. they are enthusiastic about learning new thi...
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Suggestion: have
...ed to broaden their wisdom and it would has positive effects on further aspects. ...
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Suggestion:
...as positive effects on further aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69361702128 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07962829855 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651063829787 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4615890439 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357050620769 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113889433457 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125375524836 0.0667982634062 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203478367921 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104672888944 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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