Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication Do the Benifits of this outweigh the problems

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Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the Benifits of this outweigh the problems?

Today, We live in amodern phase of life. It is irrefutabel to say that whatever we learn ther's always been a good fo us. Many people believs that we sholud found a new language for multinational interaction.I thin the advantages of invent new language is outweight the demerits.

To begin with, The demerits of this phenomenon is not much. But Firstly, if we invent come new language for international purpose than people must learn about new language and it is not easy that all people are grab language so nicely. Another disadvantage is that people are having a difficultis to communiacate with each other and so that they might get furstrated and not like to adopt new langauge. and also to learn a new language, it requires time and experience.

While, There is a plethora advantages of this phenomenon. People have to support an invent of a new international language because of this, people know about new language and they try to interact with more people and learn new language. Another advantage is that we know about countries with the help of adopting language.

Moreover, There is a chances of gaining a economy of all over the globe and another language is added in multi lingua language. Students will also benifit from this invention as they will get more opportunities to study in any corner of the world. To add further, due to new internation language individuals will have more knowelege about it and also from the language people get to know about their culuture and traditions.

In conclusion, Study the culture heritage of different countrieswill affected by the new language and i believe that the economy will also go high with help of invent a new language.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80995255001 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486111111111 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2709887335 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33596132923 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11989825016 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10160402024 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21001879727 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592161764324 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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