Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adopt to the local practices and customs. To what extend do you agree or disageree?
There is a thought about coping with various cultures if a person travel to other land. Although, maybe it seems such an adventure, I completely disagree with that because of two main reasons: it is not essential and it is not bothering you if you do know nothing about the customs.
To begin with, when someone travels to other countries they decide to have some adventures as there are too many brand new thing and as learning about the practices is the time consuming activities, they should not follow them. For instance, when the travelers engross themself in something unnecessary they feel falling apart which stops them from serving the main purpose of voyage. Suddenly, they expose that the trip is over and they do not visit any sights they were planning to.
Except the wasting time, there is no need to know about the customs thanks to fully-fledged technological world. For example, if the passengers face something questionable in locals gesture which leads to poor communication, they could browse the internet at the moment. Of course there are bunch of articles helps them to figure that specific behavior out. Therefore, thanks to world wide web which does facilitate the communication.
To conclude, my firm conviction is that people go to travel to enjoy themselves and having fun. So, they should not undergo the pressure of searching about the ethnicity as there is no adequate time and it is useless. Moreover, they can learn anything by one click anytime, anywhere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...entures as there are too many brand new thing and as learning about the practices is ...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...rnet at the moment. Of course there are bunch of articles helps them to figure that s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.004 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66257319148 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1533286031 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224770794369 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683651477689 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471898616711 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117425278714 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540444704464 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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