Some people think woman should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like man. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is traditionally thought that serving in military is evidently man’s responsibility. Along the development of society, this prejudice has become a source of controversy whether woman should be given a chance to enroll in army. I am not in favor of the latter opinion.
The first and foremost reason refers to requirements of physical and psychological patterns, woman is considered as the weak side in comparison to man. In term of health condition, their biological structure is naturally designed with particular limited-developing organs such as muscle. Hence, even when they practice with the same intensity and speed as a soldier on a daily basis, it is difficult for them to meet the military’s demand. In addition, female is endowed with a strong emotional state. They often act on their instinct’s advice to tackle problem instead of handling with their mental capability, which is absolutely exhibited in force’s background. For these reason, people hold widespread doubt whether woman are able to suffer significant and constant pressures in such a severe environment and whether they could keep their balance on facing enemies in the frontier.
Due to the woman’s limited physical and emotional characteristics mentioned above, it is unequal to exert an identical training system over both sexes. Necessarily, a unique program giving the weak side priority should be applied. As an obvious consequence, the strength of organization will be restricted. Otherwise, in case single-gender environment for male is created, the union in discipline in absence of any exceptions will be performed, which contributes to the process of optimizing the power of the air force. Therefore, the participation of fair sex in military is not highly welcomed.
In conclusion, there are several reasons why I thought that the permission of woman’s enrollment in army is not the wise option both for themselves and the military machine of nation.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46905537459 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31332648466 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6750400091 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111116921055 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341010541726 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337007558873 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686369067818 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341401921291 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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