Some people think that women should be able to do whatever job they are qualified for, including police work, while others think that it is wrong to allow women to become police officers.
What is your opinion?
Over the last few decades, women all over the world are having opportunities
to do whatever job they qualified for and thus should do it, even if it is a working in police. However, some believe that women should not be allowed to become police officers. I am in consummate accord with the latter opinion as women’s vulnerability to gun shouts and the fact that some of those police women could be a mother, do not allow myself to consider this situation.
To begin with, being a police officer sometimes requires dealing with gun shots, which in recent times having more cases. Undoubtedly, some women have passed all police examinations of the physical and mental tests which allow those female policers to carry a badge and a gun. However, in some cases, passing these trials and being a police officer is insufficient: women are not physically robust as men, and therefore if those police women were shotted, they would be more vulnerable than male officers, depending on the shotted part of the policeman.
Moreover, some of those police women could be a mother and thus they need to take care of their children. A role of mother is significant in the nurture of an infant: her existence provides a healthy growing up of child, by feeding him or her due to breast milk that according to the World Health Organization is vital for children. Additionally, men cannot take care of their children by themselves like women can.
Even though some consider that women are qualified and should work if they want as a police officer, others do not think that women should work in police structure. I believe that women should not work as a police officer they are more vulnerable to gun shots than men, as well as some of those police women could be a mother and if they die, an infant will not complete family.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as well as', 'in some cases', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223163841808 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0621468926554 0.0946595960268 66% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0649717514124 0.0501214627716 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0480225988701 0.0437548338989 110% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129943502825 0.122226691241 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0395480225989 0.0403226058552 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55123520592 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.0326793684256 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110169491525 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0338983050847 0.021408717616 158% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00847457627119 0.011925033212 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1836.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 316.048096192 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77358490566 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327044025157 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194968553459 0.28420135186 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135220125786 0.203846283523 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0911949685535 0.137316102897 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55123520592 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.56093040696 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.7257524557 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 28.9090909091 20.7743622355 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1943134515 49.517814964 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.909090909 127.492653851 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7743622355 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.814263465372 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 48.405946255 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.40404040404 1.69124875643 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4358448317 0.332605444948 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.15695363461 0.102741220458 153% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101171890323 0.0668466124924 151% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.679353746897 0.534860350844 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.161054048458 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210943030416 0.134430193775 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107516962464 0.0742795772207 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.225397274254 0.324371583561 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105210157548 0.0638462369009 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260011075524 0.228012699653 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15195507556 0.058150111329 261% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.