Some people think that work is the most important thing of people’s life. Without the success of career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are many arguments about the influence of the job in a persons’ life. It is said that, success in the career decides the happiness of life. Even though, an outstanding job could provide the comfort and facility, it does not replace the happiness of life.
Obtaining a career is a difficult task in this complex society. We have to face lot of difficulties and make lot of sacrifices in our life in finding a job. It is a challenging target in a persons’ life in achieving a job that the person would like to do. On the other hand, some people make up their mind to like the job after receiving a particular job.
Employers establish many career development plans for the better performance of the employee and for development of industry. Among these strategies they providing in-service trainings and skill developing are some of them. Other than that, salary increments incentive plans and promotions are also considered as career developments.
Promotions in the career will be providing many financial benefits to the life. It also provides comfort to makes the life very easy. Advancement of the career also elevates the pride and personal image of person within the society. It also moral and courage of the person that could benefit individually and to the society.
However, career advancement does not always rely on a persons’ happiness. There are many examples that many persons’ who owns an outstanding job does not possess a happy life. Therefore, happiness do not depend on career improvement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...o the life. It also provides comfort to makes the life very easy. Advancement of the ...
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Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge of person within the society. It also moral and courage of the person that cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0157480315 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86978439457 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507874015748 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.8966186204 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9411764706 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175571814988 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647231799536 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419868829355 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102483036792 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373029087777 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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